假设在英语课上老师给你们欣赏了电影《太空大灌篮》的主题曲IBelieveICanFly。这是一首催人奋进的励志歌曲，请你根据以下要点以“IBelieveICanFly”为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加某英语杂志社的写作比赛。
[内容要点]
（1）这首歌告诉我们自信的重要性；
（2）自信给人勇气尝试，使人成功；
（3）梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难；
（4）没有梦想和自信，不会获得成功；
（5）你的感悟（考生自拟，至少一点）。
[注意]
（1）词数90词左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
（2）参考词汇：自信—confidence（n.）；
（3）短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
IBelieveICanFly
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 love .Though not very big ,but the
Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some
People even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his
Success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quallty oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steady.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
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